Friday, July 3, 2009

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55:

FLASH FICTION Friday 55
Friday Flash 55 is a story
written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

This would be part 3 of the 55s I posted 3 last. I was going to do part two last week, but forgot. LOL I hope I can keep this going, because I want to know what happens :-)



He arrived home later than he expected.
The house is dark.
Where could she be? she knew I was coming.
She said she'd be there no matter what.
The door was open a crack. she'd never leave the door open.
Something is wrong.
He listened for sounds but only heard the deafening sound of silence.

9 comments:

Thom said...

Excellent my friend. I also hope that you keep this up. It's great

Lani said...

THANKS THOM!

G-Man said...

Thats much better!!!

Spooky... But better!

Excellent 55 My Dear...

Thanks again for participating Lani, you have an AWESOME Fourth!

G-Man

anthonynorth said...

There's nothing louder than that silence.

Stef H (Glitterbabe) said...

sure! get my blood pressure up!

hugs,

Bud Weiser, WTIT said...

Lani-
Happy 4th! Enjoy your weekend...

quilly said...

Okay, I went back and I read the old stuff, then I read this. Now I hope you can keep it up, too! Where is she? What has happened?

Hootin' Anni said...

What next? What next? You have pulled the right strings dear Lani...I'm hooked.

Hootin' Anni said...

[ps...instead of making us go back to regroup, you should copy and paste the last entries into your new one each week. ===easy way to do that is to copy and paste into your computer's notebook each week and save it...then, paste the last entries in your new blog post for those visitors like quilly] Just a suggestion.