Friday, June 19, 2009

Flash Fiction Friday 55

FLASH FICTION Friday 55
Friday Flash 55 is a story
written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.




the clouds gathered rapidly
a funnel formed in the bottom.
where do I go? How can I hide?
I'm flying....I'm dizzy
Wow, I'm above the trees.
Where's toto?
Where's aunt Em?
Where are my ruby slippers?
"wake up wake up" screams my husband," You kicked me again"
" Promise me-No more tequila before bedtime!"


Happy friday all
Lani







purple w shadow

24 comments:

Alice Audrey said...

If a hang over is the worst of it, then what a relief!

Lani said...

no kiddin!!!! :-)

Vicki said...

Great 55! Good thing I don't drink. I already wake the whole house up laughing hysterically in my sleep!

anthonynorth said...

That does, of course, give a whole new meaning to the wizard :-)
Enjoyed this.

Hootin' Anni said...

Great Lani! At least you woke up kicking your hubby instead of the wicked witch.

Dr.John said...

My favorite kind of 55. Those with a suprise ending. I loved it.

Cat said...

Oh this was perfect!

clean and crazy said...

i am still giggling here, very clever, love it.

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Clever twist.

Here's my Flash-55:

PLAYING HOUSE – THE FATHER OF THE BRIDE

Lani said...

LOL Vicki... I don't think I do much of anything once I am asleep...

But my other half smacked me in the face once...jeese

Lani said...

Anthony... I was thinking that too...LOL thanks!

Lani said...

Anni.. Hi
Yea I have enough bad luck with out scrapping with a witch! :-)
Thanks!! L

Lani said...

Dr John

Hi...thaks for stoppping in... I guess I have this thing..about surprise endings..... you should see my life@!! :-)

Lani said...

thanks you Cat!

Lani said...

thanks much C A C !!!!

Lani said...

Linda thaks for stopping in!!!!
Lani

Fandango said...

We dragons though we were going to OZ.
It was only a dream

Our 55 is up-no dream.

Susan at Stony River said...

ROFLMAO!! But what's bedtime without tequila?!

What a wonderful 55!

g-man said...

A restless sleep is better than puking ANYDAY!!!

Loved your 55 Lani, Thanks....G

Lani said...

Yes Fandango...just a dream

Susan... sometimes I wonder that same thing :-)

Thanks and so true G-man!!!!
Thanks all for stopping by and commenting!

Thom said...

ROFLMAO....that'll teach her. LOL. What a great 55.

Lani said...

hee hee...Thanks Thom!!! L

Lani said...

hee hee...Thanks Thom!!! L

MomsJournal said...

LOL too much spinning with tequila. I'll stick with rum. ;-) Great 55.