Friday, June 26, 2009

FLASH FICTION Friday 55

FLASH FICTION Friday 55
Friday Flash 55 is a story
written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

This would be part 2 of the 55 I posted week before last. I was going to do part two last week, but forgot. A story has to have a beginning a middle and an end...so i try to do that! But It is hard in 55 words! LOL I hope I can keep this going, because I want to know what happens :-)



the phone rang and she felt fearful.
he apologized for calling so late.
she waited to hear the news. He quietly said "I have the money".
Choking up, she said, "Thank God".
"it's ok, I am coming home."he said
"no matter what, I am here for you", she replied.
And he said, "I know".

18 comments:

pheromone girl said...

Nicely done. I'll be back to visit again!

Hootin' Anni said...

...it's like reading something from a romance novel.

Missy said...

A bit of mystery, undying love, and trust...Nicely said

anthonynorth said...

Nice words. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Employee No. 3699 said...

Now you have me wondering. Nice job.

G-Man said...

Lani...

You ARE a romance novel..

Excellent 55 my dear!

Thank you so much for joining the fun parade.

Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End...Galen

Lani said...

Mr G Man
thanks for your kind words!!

Of all the little "game" kind of things I do through blogging now, I have to say this is the most interesting and satisfying sort of thing(meme?) to do!

Lani said...

3699 I am wondering too! LOL I could play this every day!
thanks!!! L

Lani said...

thank you Anthony and Missy!! I appreciate your very kind words! L

Lani said...

Hey Anni... Thanks geeze wish I was smart enough...to do a romance novel is a pretty big order in my bucket list!Don't think I'll go there.
But I hope I can keep this interesting for you to keep reading....:-)

Lani said...

pheromone.. thanks much!
L

Melissa B. said...

Love the fact that you wrote this in installments. Thanks for sharing!

Stef H (Glitterbabe) said...

and then he went home to the wrong house!!!!! ooooo this is great. i cannot write so poor Anni didn't hook me on this one, but you sure can and i'm about ready to cry here.

hugs,

Lani said...

Stef... I wondered where your was on your blog! I looked!
Thanks so much for the kind words... I have always had a wild imagination but not especially gifted in the writing dept. So If I can...you can!

Hugs
Lani

Mona said...

A serial 55ve! How interesting!

Lani said...

thanks for stopping Mona!
L

Akelamalu said...

I couldn't find the first part of your 55 but this can stand alone anyway, which is very good writing indeed. :)

Mine's up too.

ciara said...

great 55. i'll have to catch up on part 1 when i can :)