FLASH FICTION Friday 55
Friday Flash 55 is a story
written in exactly 55 words.
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
This would be part 2 of the 55 I posted week before last. I was going to do part two last week, but forgot. A story has to have a beginning a middle and an end...so i try to do that! But It is hard in 55 words! LOL I hope I can keep this going, because I want to know what happens :-)he apologized for calling so late.
she waited to hear the news. He quietly said "I have the money".
Choking up, she said, "Thank God".
"it's ok, I am coming home."he said
"no matter what, I am here for you", she replied.
And he said, "I know".
17 comments:
Nicely done. I'll be back to visit again!
...it's like reading something from a romance novel.
Nice words. Looking forward to the next instalment.
Now you have me wondering. Nice job.
Lani...
You ARE a romance novel..
Excellent 55 my dear!
Thank you so much for joining the fun parade.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End...Galen
Mr G Man
thanks for your kind words!!
Of all the little "game" kind of things I do through blogging now, I have to say this is the most interesting and satisfying sort of thing(meme?) to do!
3699 I am wondering too! LOL I could play this every day!
thanks!!! L
thank you Anthony and Missy!! I appreciate your very kind words! L
Hey Anni... Thanks geeze wish I was smart enough...to do a romance novel is a pretty big order in my bucket list!Don't think I'll go there.
But I hope I can keep this interesting for you to keep reading....:-)
pheromone.. thanks much!
L
Love the fact that you wrote this in installments. Thanks for sharing!
and then he went home to the wrong house!!!!! ooooo this is great. i cannot write so poor Anni didn't hook me on this one, but you sure can and i'm about ready to cry here.
hugs,
Stef... I wondered where your was on your blog! I looked!
Thanks so much for the kind words... I have always had a wild imagination but not especially gifted in the writing dept. So If I can...you can!
Hugs
Lani
A serial 55ve! How interesting!
thanks for stopping Mona!
L
I couldn't find the first part of your 55 but this can stand alone anyway, which is very good writing indeed. :)
Mine's up too.
great 55. i'll have to catch up on part 1 when i can :)
Post a Comment